Your pitch for your opening sequence is very detailed and interesting, the use of the eerie soundtrack further shows that the genre of your opening sequence will be a crime/thriller movie and that there will be moments of shock, suspense and possibly violence. Overall a very detailed and thorough pitch for your opening sequence.
Good range of multimedia elements eg sound etc. Excellent attention to detail. I am concerned that your idea centres around making Joe believable as a hitman. He is 17. How will that be believable? I think if I saw him with a gun in a shop I would not assume hitman I would assume that he was robbing the shop. Hitmen are normally aged 30 and over because they have life experience, strength, contacts in the criminal world, are trusted by criminals etc.. I am not sure what criminal would hire a 17 year old as a hit man, or how he would have gotten into this type of career at such a young age. I would have a think about this as casting young people in roles like this can often end up being the thing that ruins a student opening as it is hard to look past that and appreciate the quality in the rest of the work.
Your pitch for your opening sequence is very detailed and interesting, the use of the eerie soundtrack further shows that the genre of your opening sequence will be a crime/thriller movie and that there will be moments of shock, suspense and possibly violence. Overall a very detailed and thorough pitch for your opening sequence.
ReplyDeleteVery extensive in terms of detail especially aspects such as location and sound. Good inclusions of multimedia elements where relevant
ReplyDeleteGood range of multimedia elements eg sound etc. Excellent attention to detail. I am concerned that your idea centres around making Joe believable as a hitman. He is 17. How will that be believable? I think if I saw him with a gun in a shop I would not assume hitman I would assume that he was robbing the shop. Hitmen are normally aged 30 and over because they have life experience, strength, contacts in the criminal world, are trusted by criminals etc.. I am not sure what criminal would hire a 17 year old as a hit man, or how he would have gotten into this type of career at such a young age. I would have a think about this as casting young people in roles like this can often end up being the thing that ruins a student opening as it is hard to look past that and appreciate the quality in the rest of the work.
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